Sketch and Line Art..(More improvement x_X)

Okay, now my mom let's me to draw in photoshop for now.. finally! Geez.. my siblings and my mom gets mad at me when I'm using photoshop because I always turn off the internet.. Hey, it's not my fault, the computer repairman said that I should turn off the internet when I'm going to use the photoshop. I wish there is some way to use photoshop without getting internet to turn off. The computer is actually have a fake or copied Windows 7, which means it's not original and it would totally broke the computer easily. Ugghhh.. we need a original Windows 7 right now..
The sketch looks terrible but the line art looks fine.. Now is the shading and coloring turn.. might take a while.

It's almost look like bleed-style except the sketch..-_-"